Well done.
It's a good tutorial, aims for those novice flash animators who already know a bit on flash (ex; know how to make buttons, apply actionscript..).
If you want this tutorial to go sweep to more un-experienced beginners, then I would suggest you try and chew things over a bit more in detail. Such as when you request that a button should be made, tell them in a couple of words how a button should be made (even though there are separate tutorials for that, it won't hurt to have a more detailed version).
Also I found that successful tutorials provide good interactivity; because reading is one thing, but going along step by step is another, and you learn more if you actually see how things work yourself. Mainly for this tutorial you can show the audience the final product, so they know how all this work contributes to a whole.
I can't say that I'm an experienced flash animator though, as I'm just starting as well. But I hope this review helps!